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Swing Set Reverie

A Sky-ku

By D.K. ShepardPublished about a year ago Updated about a year ago 1 min read

Toes tickling the sky,

Might I grow some wings to fly,

If I just let go?

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D.K. Shepard

Character Crafter, Witty Banter Enthusiast, World Builder, Unpublished novelist...for now

Fantasy is where I thrive, but I like to experiment with genres for my short stories. Currently employed as a teacher in Louisville.

dkshepard.com

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  • The Dani Writerabout a year ago

    Whew boy! As children, many of us thought about it. Flight is exhilarating and you captured that in this sky-ku. Best of luck in the challenge!

  • Testabout a year ago

    I love this feeling DK, swinging and having that split second of wanting to be airborne!! Brilliant entry for the challenge!!

  • Joe O’Connorabout a year ago

    I've been blanking on ideas for this one DK, but the swing is a great one! Feels daring and optimistic:)

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    Simply adorable. I can feel my childhood in this. 😁

  • Gina C.about a year ago

    Oh, I just love the sense of curiosity and freedom in this, DK! Exquisite!

  • Very cute! I’ve always loved swings & the sensation of flying 😃.

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Oh, I swear I felt my heart soar!

  • I've always had this thought while I was on the swing. Miss those days. Loved your Haiku!

  • John Coxabout a year ago

    Oh my! The sweet, sweet kiss of childhood dreams. You rocked my boat with this one, DK!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    Love this take on the challenge! Best of luck 🤞

  • Anna about a year ago

    Great one!

  • Alyssa Mussoabout a year ago

    I love this! What a wonderful haiku. It makes me miss the simple days!

  • Dana Crandellabout a year ago

    From experience, yes, but not very far and you want to be sure to stick the landing. 😉 Love the childlike innocence.

  • Joe Pattersonabout a year ago

    Yep you probably will.

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    Playful and curious at the same time. Lovely work!

  • Rachel Deemingabout a year ago

    You got to hope so! I loved the swings. Now, I'm a bit like Shaun.

  • Sean A.about a year ago

    Awwww, takes me back. Now I just get seasick. A very sweet haiku

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