Swimming in Love.
A Poem on the Beauty and Wonder of Love in a Fish Tank.
In a tank of crystal clear
Where water shimmers, bright and sheer
Swim the fish of love so true
In shades of red and gold and blue
Their fins, they flutter, like a dance
A joyful motion, a sweet romance
For in this aquarium of love
These fish, they soar, like a dove
Their scales, they glisten, in the light
A spectacle, a pure delight
And in their movements, we can see
A love that's pure, and wild and free
For love, it takes many forms
And here, in this tank, it transforms
Into a beauty, so serene
A wonderland, a dreamlike scene
So let us watch, with awe and wonder
As these love fish, they dance and ponder
For in their world, we can perceive
The power of love, that will never leave.
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Quincy.V
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Comments (7)
This is so beautiful! I feel like I was just taken on a magical ride through the love and warmth of these fish! Lovely flow and wording!
A very beautiful poem, such vivid details!
This was charming, beautiful and heartfelt! I love the rhythm and rhyme scheme you created!
Cadence was charming, the imagery vivid. Heartfelt writing. I hope this one gets Top Story.
"For love, it takes many forms And here, in this tank, it transforms" i love that the whole poem is mastery - thanks
There cannot be too many poems about emotions. Lovely words, imagery and love.
This is a lovely and enchanting poem that beautifully captures the essence of love through the image of fish swimming in a crystal-clear tank. The vivid descriptions of the fish, with their fluttering fins and shimmering scales, create a captivating visual image. The use of color, particularly the shades of red, gold, and blue, adds to the richness of the imagery. The poem's structure and rhythm also contribute to its beauty. The rhyming scheme and consistent meter create a musical quality that flows like the movement of the fish. The metaphor of the aquarium as a world of love is apt and imaginative, and the idea that love takes many forms and can be seen in the natural world is a poignant message. Overall, this is a wonderful poem that celebrates the power and beauty of love. It is a pleasure to read and leaves the reader feeling uplifted and inspired. Well done!