Sweet Eleanor
Everyone seemed to adore
Sweet little Eleanor
A child so pretty
As gentle as a kitty
With golden hair
A face so fair
‘What a wonderful child’
The compliments piled
‘So gentle and sweet
You couldn’t hope to meet
A nicer child
who never gets riled’
No-one could ever believe
She had the power to deceive
Even when she beamed
She wasn’t all she seemed
Beneath those curls
She wasn’t like other girls
Eleanor had a secret
She was determined to keep it
Eleanor was not who she seemed to be
Her power the villagers could not see
Hidden in the body of that child
Raged a power oh so wild
Eleanor was a witch of the darkest kind
A spell she will cast on your mind
She will bend you to her will
Your thoughts and feelings will remain still
The villagers would smile, simper and sigh
Eleanor planned for them to die
A promise she made long ago
When life turned her heart to snow
Eleanor was a witch’s daughter
But this poor woman was led to slaughter
Long ago in a forgotten time
The villagers enacted a terrible crime
Each year the witch would use her powers
To help grow the harvest and flowers
But this eventually made the villagers lazy
Their desire to work loose and hazy
That years harvest had been bad
This made the villagers angry and mad
The witch was gentle, sweet and mild
The villagers decided she was evil and wild
They decided to assign blame
And for the witch the villagers came
To her home they burst through the door
Knocking the witch down to the floor
‘Witch Witch’ they did cry
‘Witch Witch you must die!’
The witch screamed, yelled and fought
The villagers laughed ‘You are caught’
And upstairs hiding in her room
Eleanor watched mummy dragged to her doom
In that moment she made a vow
She would get them, she knew how
A witch’s power flows through the blood
You decide if you use it for good
Hate filled the little girls heart
She knew her revenge would be her art
And so she cast her spell that very day
The villagers would be her prey
She made them believe she was so kind
Her spell had taken over their mind
She made them suffer day by day
For her mother they would pay
She poisoned the water in the well
Those who drank, down they fell
She scorched and burned the harvest land
All the flowers she covered in sand
The livestock she took and set them free
Watching them run she giggled in glee
The villagers were hungry and scared
Darkly their fear grew and flared
‘What is happening?’ They would yell
Little Eleanor would never tell
Eleanor turned the village to ice
Their betrayal has come with a price
She turned their food into stone
‘No more please’ they would moan
No food, no water, never ending cold
Their homes started growing mould
‘What did we do to deserve this!?’
‘You’ll find out’ Eleanor would hiss
Eleanor’s plan was not done
She’d only started having her fun
She waited for darkness for part two
She knew exactly what she would do
Into their homes she did creep
Watching their children in their sleep
Over their beds she whispered a spell
For the children it would not end well
Slowly the children faded away
In their place a creature would stay
Sharp little claws and a long tail
In the morning their parents did wail
‘Rats! Rats!’ We are overrun
‘Rats! Rats!’ What is to be done!
The only way to get rid of a rat
Is to get get a great big cat!’
Eleanor knew exactly that
And turned herself into a huge black cat
‘Hooray’ the villages yelled in joy
‘The rats cannot escape this ploy!’
Eleanor killed every rat in sight
Her rampage lasting until the night
The villagers were filled with glee
Now their village was rat free
‘But wait!’ A mothers yell was wild
‘I cannot find my child!’
‘ Nor I’ ‘Nor Me’ ‘Nor us too!’
‘What oh what are we to do!?’
The villagers scoured the land
Just as Eleanor had planned
But the children were all gone
They couldn’t find even one
The parents searched into the night
Searching up until morning light
Their faces etched with pain and fear
At the loss of those most dear
As the sun rose into the sky
Eleanor let her spell die
The dead rats scattered everywhere
Started to grow human hair
Little hands replaced their claws
Little feet instead of paws
Horror appeared in their parents faces
Their children lay in the dead rats places
The screams rose into the morn
Eleanor looked on with scorn
Every single child was gone
Eleanor’s revenge had won
As she left the that village of loss and pain
She knew their lives would never be the same
They had taken away her soul
Their ruin was her only goal
Here is a warning, heed it well
Be careful not to fall under a witches spell
Treat them kindly even if they’re bad
And Never, Ever make a witch mad!!!!
About the Creator
nieve hearity-Mummylogues
Hi, I’m a first time writer, I have written many plays but never written a story. I’m excited to see what happens

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