Sunset
The golden hour?
Time for reflection
Sea kissed; my mind cursed by fire
Breathe. I too shall rise!
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My third entry into the:
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About the Creator
Pauline Fountain
Writing and photography provide a creative outlet to reflect with meaning on my life.
My mental health? Bipolar 1 (Rapid Cycling), Complex PTSD and Functional Neurological Disorder.
My son’s gentle wisdom furnishes me with the gift of hope.
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Comments (12)
I understand that sunset is a difficult time for you, but you stay positive, hopeful. Powerful piece.
This is a great contender for the challenge. Excellent entry, Pauline.
i love this Pauline, continue with your good write ups
Really like this one
Just lovely, Pauline!
This is a beautiful piece. Well done.
Great job and I love the pictures! How do your cloud pictures come out so well?
Gorgeous!
Beautiful!!
Oh my goodness, your photos are so breathtakingly stunning! Loved them and your Haiku!
Beautifully written and presented. Best of luck.
Gosh, what photos!! You're so creative 😻 And I love the words, I love the flow. I love the thought of working in harmony with the celestial sphere. Rising when sol rises, reflecting when it reflects upon the river. You nailed it!! 👏🤗