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๐š‚๐šž๐š—๐š•๐š’๐š๐š‘๐š

๐“ข๐“พ๐“ท๐“ผ๐“ฑ๐“ฒ๐“ท๐“ฎ ๐“–๐“ธ๐“ต๐“ญ ๐“ฆ๐“ช๐“ผ ๐“—๐“ฎ๐“ป ๐“ข๐“ธ๐“พ๐“ต #13 (FOR CONTENT WARNING SKIP TO ENDโš ๏ธ)

By Lou HolzPublished 8 months ago โ€ข 1 min read
๐š‚๐šž๐š—๐š•๐š’๐š๐š‘๐š
Photo by Daniel Peters on Unsplash

The sun cut through the trees

like it always does -

sharp but gentle,

spilling over my hands

like warm tea.

*

Birds didnโ€™t sing,

but thatโ€™s alright.

Some mornings feel quieter

than others.

*

Thereโ€™s peace in quiet.

No dogs barking,

no sirens,

just the breeze tugging at my shirt

like a kid asking for a glance.

*

The groundโ€™s soft here.

Pine needles and grass,

no stones to scrape your knees.

or litter to catch on clothes.

dirt easy to dig.

*

I watched the sun rise slow,

stretching over everything.

Beautiful, how it finds you

even in the middle of nowhere.

*

The light even dripped onto it

i see it. past the tree.

The sun catches it and

it glows golden, beautiful.

Almost alive again,

even as the flies flock.

*

He talked too much.

Said my name too many times.

Laughed with his mouth open.

Stepped on a mushroom

and didnโ€™t even notice.

Rude to the forest.

*

I asked for silence

and told him the forest was quiet

for a reason.

He thought I meant wolves.

*

Now itโ€™s just me.

And sunlight.

And this serene hush so thick

each leaf feels like a gentle bell in the

swaying of golden green.

*

he's gone now.

it's a few steps away.

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CONTENT WARNINGS: Implied murder, mild violence & death and unsettling themes.

Please don't read if you're uncomfortable with any of these themes

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About the Creator

Lou Holz

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(All my stories are in fonts so you can tell them apart)

๐™ฟ๐šŠ๐š›๐š ๐š˜๐š ๐šŠ ๐š‹๐šž๐š—๐š๐š•๐šŽ/๐š™๐š›๐š˜๐š–๐š™๐š๐šŽ๐š ๐š™๐š˜๐šŽ๐š–

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๐•Š๐•ฅ๐• ๐•ฃ๐•š๐•–๐•ค

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  • Caroline Craven8 months ago

    Not quite sure how you managed to pull off making murder sound beautiful but you did!

  • "just the breeze tugging at my shirt like a kid asking for a glance." I especially loved those lines. Your poem was so beautifully written despite being poignant

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