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Sunday Drive

summer fades away

By Harper LewisPublished 2 months ago Updated 2 months ago 1 min read
Top Story - November 2025

Today was the last day of Indian Summer

in Western North Carolina, land of mountains, rivers, and trees.

I wanted to make love out in nature, under the birch, oaks, and pines,

but we never found a good place with a safe shoulder

to pull over and traipse through the woods with our blanket (we left the dog at home).

We built a fire when we got home and enjoyed a picnic on a pallet beside it,

woodsmoke infusing our very souls as we feasted on hummus, flatbread, salami, pomegranates, mango-ginger white stilton, and dark chocolate covered cherries, the dehydrated ones, not the weird gooey ones in the plastic trays in flat, rectangular boxes, and a stout beer.

The fire dwindled to embers and the North wind blew the scarlet leaves down from the sugar maples in the front yard, and we finished our picnic, came inside without finding soulful communion and slipped into a hot bath with candles, crystals, incense, and moonlight.

We’re in pajamas now, enjoying cold, rich vanilla ice cream in bed, where the sweetness lingers like velvet melting into the marrow of my bones.

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About the Creator

Harper Lewis

I'm a weirdo nerd who’s extremely subversive. I like rocks, incense, and all kinds of witchy stuff. Intrusive rhyme bothers me.

I’m known as Dena Brown to the revenuers and pollsters.

MA English literature, College of Charleston

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  • Christopher Beard2 months ago

    Great work, creative and makes one think about a different type of road trip

  • Aarsh Malik2 months ago

    This feels like a snapshot of peace and connection. The sensory details bring the scene to life, and the sweetness of the moment lingers long after reading.

  • Marilyn Glover2 months ago

    Beautiful work, Harper. Congratulations on your top story❣ This was a lovely Sunday read for me. Thank you!

  • Gohar Ali2 months ago

    Summer

  • Novel Allen2 months ago

    Absolutely beautiful, Indian summer is really endearing. You are living the life. congrats.

  • Caitlin Charlton2 months ago

    🔥I love how you started, with a sort of, declaration. 🧺Then told us a bit about North Carolina. 🪾Then the 🫢 surprised line three. Made this moment you were telling us about, all the better. 🍻Aww. I wish you both could've found a good place with a safe shoulder. Ooo the stuff at the picnic 🧺 sounds delicious 🤤 Beautifully atmospheric '...The fire dwindled to embers...' 🧙🏾🧙🏾‍♂️It would be so cute if you two were wearing matching coloured PJ's or complementary colours. ♥️🤗🖤

  • Milan Milic2 months ago

    Ово дело прелепо дочарава горко-слатки прелаз из топлине у хладноћу — нежна ода пролазним тренуцима, једноставним задовољствима и тихој интимности заједничке несавршености. Осећа се као да сама јесен говори кроз поезију.

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