Summertime in Chicago 😎
Sweet Summer Song 🎶Extravaganza❗❗
I was,
Hanging with my friends and I
Bound sight of him again…
This time he nodded
His head
And I
Just grinned…
😎
Summertime
In
Chicago
Just Hanging With My Friends…
😎
That day he put a spell
On me,
“Oh God, will this ever end?”
We Had Fun 🎢 it was a Blast 💦,
But aye that came to an end…
😎
He Broke my Heart
And Now
I'm Revising my Locks 🔑
Currently, I'm on a Mission,
To Take My Love Back!
😎
That Summertime in Chicago
Is Where I lost
My Devotion…
😎
I Buckled my seat strap,
While moving forward
With-it
And Now I'm Steady shifting Emotions…
😎
While in A Rocky Love Transmission-
Sitting on The Porch,
Saturating,
Recollections
Of how
I fell
In love
Precisely by Kicking it!
A Summer Time in Chicago To Remember-
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Comments (12)
Very cool 👌
This made me so emotional as it was very relatable! Loved your poem!
This was a nice poem.
Memories of joy & loss & growing a little, wisdom gained, treasured in the heart.
I can so relate to this poem. I was always in love during the summers when I was a teenager. LOL!
Spectacular!!! Loved this💕❤️❤️
Very nicely done.
I must say that you're the King of Eloquence! I loved the flow, the message, and the delivery! "Revising my locks" ; "steady shifting emotions!"Man, there were so many brilliant lines in this one! The song choice was superb as well! You had me over here groovin'! Go lil bro Go!
Great
It’s nice hanging out on a porch in Chicago. Nice place to be in the summer. I like the beat of the summer song you pick. Excellent poem 💗
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