Summer Hike
A Titillating Moment, underneath the outdoor atmosphere...
I barreled the first one to the subsequent,
We drank,
More wine...
While the Orange sky,
Faced the mountains...
I skimmed past, His perfectly fine body and I studied the clouds as they slowly alternated above our heads...
What a beautiful promenade...
We stayed until the sky began to fade,
altering darkness from The Day.
However, he offered to swell more wine.
I casually declined and offered him a ride...
Beneath the dark skies, our bodies inclined,
In the back seat of my Ride...
It’s been a week and I haven’t forgotten that night.
Indeed, I enjoyed my summer Hike❗
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Comments (15)
Lonzo, this is my favorite poem of yours. So sultry! If there are two things I love, it’s men and nature. This conjured up some nights of my own I won’t forget. I featured this in my latest Beat story with a song. Hope you enjoy. 🎶 💕
Eloquent and touching as ever. Your poems have no restrictions, and I haven't read one yet I didn't love. This was no exception! 😉
This would have made a romantic story 🥰
OOOOH la la! Really well done, Lonzo!
Hot & hotter!!! Dropped a ♥
Oooo, that was hot and steamy! Awesomeeee!
Love it!
Get it, Handsomelouii! I remember being young and spontaneous like that. 💖
Sizzling and sultry, just the way it should be on a summer hike. Of course, there is nature and stuff to admire but not when a distraction is right there in front of you, lol. Loved the poem! 💖
I bet you did, lol. Sounds like it was wonderful. Still in touch?
This is a great poem!
loved it! There's nothing like summertime fun!
Summer love in nature's theater, another beautiful piece. Bravo!
Oh yeah. Great hike, great poem.
Yes! Summer hikes are so beautiful! I loved the subtle rhyming in this poem. It was so well-written.