Summer 2011
~For The 'This Is How I Remember it' Challenge~
A New York State of Mind collides with Northwest Southern Comfort...
Two souls magnetically drawn through physical attributes & a shared faith in God; mutual soul attraction that felt like a lightning rod...
A fire & a water sign unite; both in love with being right...
Heated debates & froyo licks; interactions as erratic yet exciting as an adventuresome excursion on a pogo stick...
Fiery words... then forgiveness & a forehead kiss; cherished moments of unbridled bliss...
Strolls in the park; bible studies that left their mark...
Unequally yoked in nature, yet attraction beyond 10... Lord, please allow me to feel this type of dynamic connection again...
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Tiffany Gordon
I am a super-spiritual, fun-loving artist, writer, & peer-counselor residing in the Pacific Northwest. I am also an Institute of Children's Literature alumna who enjoys writing about the triumph of the human spirit.
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Vividly portrayed memories… I especially like: “ Heated debates & froyo licks; interactions as erratic yet exciting as an adventuresome excursion on a pogo stick...”🤗
Oh, I loved how you described the attraction! I could feel the passion and connection.
OH, I love this, Tiffany! Felt the sparks/contrasts of a magnetic connection. 🥹💙🫶 So well done!
Power-packed Tiffany! This one leapt off the page. Great writing!
I hope you find that connection again . Amazing poem Tiff
Wow remembering the good. Love is hard but feels good when its right. Excellent poem.
Lovely connection yin and yang ☯️ beautifully put
Wooohooooo congratulations on your Leaderboard placement! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
That's really lovely!! 🌹❤️
Don't force the connections...they appear naturally when the stars align. Lovely uplifting words...keep smiling and rewards will materialize unexpectedly.
Very well written, Tiffany. I like the way you put your words together and this one. You conveyed the thrill and excitement very well. Great work!
Spectacular Summer x 10!!! Superbly penned, Tiffany!!!♥️♥️💕
I hope two such hearts collide again. The stars are aligning Tiff, nothing before its time. Wonderfully hopeful and nostalgic. blessings to the clouds and beyond.
Oh, I loved this so much! I think you’ll get to feel that type of connection again. Beautiful work, Tiffany ❤️
"Lord, please allow me to feel this type of dynamic connection again..." Wow! Same wishes for you, Tiffany!❤️
Mmmm, froyo licks, so yummy hehehehe. Loved your poem!
Such a vivid and heartfelt reflection 😊
Passionate and lovely poem. Strolls in the park, bible studies that left their mark. Nicely Done!!
Who is this special guy?
So lovely maybe god will send it unexpectedly to you. I hope he does ♦️♦️♦️🦋
Awww 💝💐💐💝
Your poem is full of passion, contrast, and yearning. I feel the intensity, the love, and the prayer in every line.
I like the way you played with personalities, intertwining the magic and surprise that they bring, into words. Bringing you both together, yet apart by the need to both be right. Fiery words turns to forehead kisses. The need for romance, but wisdom wins. I really do hope you can get this again, but with God in the midst so that even though hard, the way would be led through wisdom and understanding. Then those fiery moments could be softened, delayed, spoken life into so that it blows away into worship, prayers and devotion. This was very well written Tiffy, I love, love and I love reading about love ♥️🤗