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strange feeling

Your sadness

By Kisama Riyo Published about a year ago 1 min read

A strange feeling when sorrows touch you

And your heart resides and life fills you with sorrows

And pushes you towards a deep well to be held accountable

A strange feeling when you need brothers

And they were the first to help you

And you are the one who said I don't need you, man

So why don't you be honest with yourself and change the colors?

Why don't you be the artist and determine the place for us?

I became in the dark surrounded by aggression from every side

I don't know how much we have to pay to end the bet

For we are prisoners of the prison of thought that led us to delirium?

So please let me be as the rose of the garden was

Free in nature, decorating the place with its captivating fragrance

Please change the blackness of this time

For its darkness weakens the heart and weakens the strength

If my feelings fall, they need security

No matter what I say, O entity

You are the evil that remains in the place

So leave before you become the title of your sadness

O sorrows, go and free me in oblivion

For without you, O jailer, I have become safe and secure

So do not occupy my mind with your thoughts, O passionate lover

For I do not need a thought that leads me to humiliation

For strange feelings have changed what is in the conscience

And brought injustice and tyranny to the homelands of the world

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About the Creator

Kisama Riyo

I have always been interested in poetry and essay, especially rhyme style, so I decided to post my essay here and see if I have any talent in poetry or not.

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  • Antoni De'Leonabout a year ago

    This is really a deep an open-hearted poem. Always write your poetry, your words matter. Hope to read more.

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