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I used to love falls
The wind catching me, I stopped-short
Now, the wind just halts.
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That felt so sad. Loved your Haiku so much!
Love the word choice here.Awsome job.
Gorgeous poem! Halts was the perfect word there.
Love the subtlety here 😁
Beautiful lines
Oh, that last line! Excellent.