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Stars and Soil

A Fourth of July reflection on patriotism, immigration, and dual identity

By Carolina BorgesPublished 6 months ago 1 min read
Stars and Soil
Photo by Aaron Burden on Unsplash

I wear red, white, and blue
with the kind of pride
that comes from choice—
from packing roots
into carry-ons,
and chasing a flag
that promised room.

I light sparklers for freedom,
wave stripes in the sun,
not forgetting for a second
that my fire
was first lit in the Andes,
that my heartbeat
still hums in Quechua rhythms,
in my mother’s accent,
in the stories
that didn’t need translation.

I’m proud to be here—
to have walked into this dream
before it got priced
like a gated parade,
before visas became
golden tickets
for those already fed.

Yes—laws matter.
Lines matter.
But what about the hands
still reaching
through barbed hope?

What about the children
whose only crime
is wanting a sky
that doesn’t shoot back?

So today,
I’ll hold both truths—
this country I love,
and the ache
for what it’s forgotten.

Because freedom
was never meant
to be exclusive.
And liberty
shouldn't come
with a receipt.

Author’s Note:

This is an Independence Day post reflecting that I love this country and what it’s given me, but I also love where I come from. This poem is for those who carry two flags in their hearts, and for those still hoping for a chance to plant their roots here.

I was born in Florida, but my roots stretch all the way to Peru — to the streets my parents walked before they ever imagined raising a child in the U.S. They came here legally, with very little, and everything they built started from scratch. Their sacrifices are why I get to write this from a place of both gratitude and grief.

Because I do feel both. Grateful for the opportunity. Grieving for the fact that many people today won’t get the same one — not because they’re unworthy, but because the gate is higher, the rules harsher, and the dream harder to access.

This poem isn’t about politics. It’s about memory, identity, and the in-between space where love for two countries can live at once. If you’ve ever felt torn, proud, confused, or quietly lucky — I hope this meets you there.

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About the Creator

Carolina Borges

I've been pouring my soul onto paper and word docs since 2014

Poet of motherhood, memory & quiet strength

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  • Joe O’Connor6 months ago

    Profound, personal, and powerful Carolina! You discuss a complex issue well, and "and chasing a flag that promised room." is a line that says a lot. Some great descriptions in here that hook the reader and make them sit with your ideas.

  • Sandy Gillman6 months ago

    So beautifully said. The mix of pride, memory, and honesty really came through.

  • Sean A.6 months ago

    “ liberty shouldn’t come with a receipt” is a hell of a line! And that stanza about the sky, not shooting back, felt a little hard wrenching. Well done!

  • Lolly Vieira6 months ago

    Very eloquently said!

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