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Stagnant Loss

Senryu

By Andrew C McDonaldPublished 11 months ago 1 min read

Stagnant pools of hope

Awash with drowned memories

A lake of regret

Senryu

About the Creator

Andrew C McDonald

Andrew McDonald was a 911 dispatcher for 30 yrs with a B.S. in Math (1985). He served as an Army officer 1985 to 1992, honorably exiting a captain.

https://www.amazon.com/Killing-Keys-Andrew-C-McDonald-ebook/dp/B07VM843XL?ref_=ast_author_dp

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran11 months ago

    That was so sad. Oh well, that's how life is

  • Babs Iverson11 months ago

    Terrific Haiku!!!💕❤️❤️

  • Mother Combs11 months ago

    but tadpoles!

  • Marie381Uk 11 months ago

    Fabulous haiku

  • Very Intense and well written, friend!!!!!!

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