translucent drops of water, fall from the sun kissed pillows of winters white
releasing a sweet yet tangy scent of evergreen needles, once trapped beneath sheets of bitter cold
the morning silence awakens to the crackling pop of thawing layers of frost and breaking ice
I tilt my head back and feel natures damp chill tickle and dance as tiny aqua globes land upon my outstretched tongue
in this moment I savor the sweet nectar of spring.
About the Creator
JBaz
I have enjoyed writing for most of my life, never professionally.
I wish to now share my stories with others, lets see where it goes.
Born and raised on the Canadian Prairies, I currently reside on the West Coast. I call both places home.
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Comments (11)
sun kissed pillows of winters white - I adore this description!
So beautiful. It brings back vivid memories of spring in New England.
So good! With such strong sensory imagery this scene was exquisitely immersive
Spectacular nature poem!!! Uplifting and inspiring!!! Loving it!!!🩷❤️💕
Jason, this is so beautiful!! I love the different layers of sensory elements that you were able to add into this poem! It's pretty fun watching you dabble in poetry!!
Absolutely gorgeous - even as fall is coming on here, I can feel the lovely hope for spring in every line of this vivid sensory piece!
Tiny aqua gloves, I especially loved that! Such a beautiful poem!
I wish it were spring. I loved this!
This is beautiful, beguiling and a harsh reminder that winter is around the bend in reality, and the experience of spring's dawning is many months away. This is a wonderful entry to the challenge, Jason!
That was beautiful. A perfect description of early spring.
spectacular, pal! I felt transported and every line gave my senses life!