Now, I don’t know
if she saw me
when she decided to
bend over to
pick up her bag and go
past the last tree
on the right.
My thoughts did not seem
responsible
for the light
of a fresh sunbeam
that caught her full
and quite heavenly
body (smooth –
tempting and tanned
like warm sand).
It was up to me
to watch and move,
maybe even to remember
what comes with these warm days,
all endless
as that beam; that light
which caressed her,
and me, a shade among the rays.
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Lovely poem!
I can see it all from the reflection in your words! Beautiful poem!
Gorgeous images, very well done!!
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