Speech Bubbles
i;m just going with it

i went away
i wasn't here
i went away
for a second
dunno where
just a minute ago
and that second
not a precise indication
of any length
of time
but
i was in a place
where EVERYONE
spoke with speech bubbles
i could read
what they said
and hear
what they said
everything
anyone said
it was like
i was in
a fuckin comic book
the surreal tingles
were not lost on me
it was grouse!
in this place
every thought
was in
a little cloud
and it had
sequentially littler clouds
connecting
it
to
the
head
of
the
THINKER
so many
unguarded moments
so many
distant longings
and not one
upset person
anywhere!
i didn't question
the whys and how's
i was caught
by my first
B U B B L E
i looked up
and i read this poem
in a little cloud
above my head
i knew i had written it
but until now
i knew not what it said
it had a neat opaque
teal-ish coloured
ten point
new times roman font
pleasing
to both the eye
and the centre
that fact that it was
attached to my head
was something else
in itself
this could
have been
a perfect world
…
could
have
been
pins and needles
needles and pins
pop pop pop
the end begins
pins and needles
needles and pins
pop pop pop
nobody wins
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler



Comments (4)
Wonderful poets
Oooo, I especially loved the pins and needles, and the pop pop pop hehehe
Loved this and the fact you linked some Devin Townsend. Nicely done sir! Lots to think about from your unique and creative mind!
Nice work, powerful speech bubbles