Speak To Me Of Love
Surrender
Warm me with your word, she said
Talk to me of love.
Pour your fire out, for me to see.
Tell me the word that you hide, the ones you dare not say.
Let go of your fear, here and now, for me.
Give me who you are for free.
Let me see what you hold back.
Show me the part that you keep put away.
Stay with me thru good or bad.
Hold me in your gaze.
Let me see the sun rise, in your eyes.
Melt me down, and set a fire, with the heat held, in your soul.
Mold me with care, kept safe here, in your hand.
Open your door to find a way, to let me be your path.
Give me the key to find out who you are.
Let me see just who I am, when you hold me next to you.
Sing to me the love song in your soul.
Dive with me, into the sky, to soar and sway as one.
To a hide away - for ones who fall in love.
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Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
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Comments (9)
I love the concept you went with here for your poem! Very creative!
The idylls of love in all five languages (hadn't noticed that until I read Leslie's comment). Loved everything about this, including with my one word of caution: the words I dare not say & the part of me I hide, even demons tremble & fear for me.
All of the love languages 💖 Beautiful.
Kelli, this is brilliant!!! Your last line is beautiful and nails it!!!♥️♥️💕
Awesome ✨ ❤️😉📝💯
You are a force to be reckoned with in this challenge, Kelli! Looking forward to more of these!
This is beautiful, Kelli.
This is simply beautiful
so beautiful. how could anyone not wish to find a love like that?