Poets logo

Speak To Me Of Love

Surrender

By Kelli Sheckler-AmsdenPublished 3 years ago Updated 3 years ago 1 min read
Speak To Me Of Love
Photo by 愚木混株 cdd20 on Unsplash

Warm me with your word, she said

Talk to me of love.

Pour your fire out, for me to see.

Tell me the word that you hide, the ones you dare not say.

Let go of your fear, here and now, for me.

Give me who you are for free.

Let me see what you hold back.

Show me the part that you keep put away.

Stay with me thru good or bad.

Hold me in your gaze.

Let me see the sun rise, in your eyes.

Melt me down, and set a fire, with the heat held, in your soul.

Mold me with care, kept safe here, in your hand.

Open your door to find a way, to let me be your path.

Give me the key to find out who you are.

Let me see just who I am, when you hold me next to you.

Sing to me the love song in your soul.

Dive with me, into the sky, to soar and sway as one.

To a hide away - for ones who fall in love.

love poems

About the Creator

Kelli Sheckler-Amsden

Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition

If you like what you read, feel free to leave a tip, I would love some feedback

Find me on twitter @kelli7958958

or facebook

Reader insights

Outstanding

Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!

Top insights

  1. Compelling and original writing

    Creative use of language & vocab

  2. Easy to read and follow

    Well-structured & engaging content

  3. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

  1. Expert insights and opinions

    Arguments were carefully researched and presented

  2. Eye opening

    Niche topic & fresh perspectives

  3. Heartfelt and relatable

    The story invoked strong personal emotions

  4. Masterful proofreading

    Zero grammar & spelling mistakes

  5. On-point and relevant

    Writing reflected the title & theme

Add your insights

Comments (9)

Sign in to comment
  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    I love the concept you went with here for your poem! Very creative!

  • The idylls of love in all five languages (hadn't noticed that until I read Leslie's comment). Loved everything about this, including with my one word of caution: the words I dare not say & the part of me I hide, even demons tremble & fear for me.

  • Leslie Writes3 years ago

    All of the love languages 💖 Beautiful.

  • Babs Iverson3 years ago

    Kelli, this is brilliant!!! Your last line is beautiful and nails it!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Awesome ✨ ❤️😉📝💯

  • Dana Crandell3 years ago

    You are a force to be reckoned with in this challenge, Kelli! Looking forward to more of these!

  • Cathy holmes3 years ago

    This is beautiful, Kelli.

  • Poppy 3 years ago

    This is simply beautiful

  • Margaret Brennan3 years ago

    so beautiful. how could anyone not wish to find a love like that?

Find us on social media

Miscellaneous links

  • Explore
  • Contact
  • Privacy Policy
  • Terms of Use
  • Support

© 2026 Creatd, Inc. All Rights Reserved.