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Sorry I Noticed

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By Luna JordanPublished 3 months ago 1 min read
Sorry I Noticed
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Oh,

my bad,

I must’ve misunderstood;

when you said forever,

I thought you would.

*

I guess “just a fling”

is love’s new trend

and I’m the fool who

thought it wouldn’t end.

*

Did I overreact when I caught the lie?

Sorry for the shouting and the tearful goodbye.

*

Oh,

sorry I noticed

your tangled sheets.

My trust just tripped

over your late night tweets.

*

Sorry I cared

and sorry I cried.

Next time,

I’ll clap while you

sneak and hide.

*

Was I too loud

wrecking your shrill?

How dare I question

your freewill thrill?

*

I should’ve baked

you a congrats cake

for each little promise

you chose to break.

*

Oops, my loyalty got in your way.

I’ll send flowers on your next betrayal day.

*

Oh,

sorry I noticed

your tangled sheets.

My trust just tripped

over your late night tweets.

*

Sorry I cared

and sorry I cried.

Next time,

I’ll clap while you

sneak and hide.

*

Let me yell

and sink your game.

Thanks for teaching me

how to play with a flame.

*

I’m cured now.

I’m fine.

*

I see the plan

to love like a ghost

and lie like a man.

*

Oh,

sorry I noticed,

guess that’s my crime.

Next time,

I’ll cheer when you cheat,

you slime.

*

Sorry I hoped

and sorry I stayed

but mostly,

babe,

sorry I got played.

*

Yeah,

so, so sorry I noticed.

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Luna Jordan

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 months ago

    "I should’ve baked you a congrats cake for each little promise you chose to break." THISSSSSSS!!! That was my favourite part!

  • Mark Graham3 months ago

    Good job, and that's telling him.

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