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Something

Feel

By Ashley ShiflettPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Something
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Silence

Broken pieces

Endless void

Trapped

People yelling

Noone surviving

I hear nothing.

Sitting

Legs crossed

Pain ignoring

Mourning

Eyes shut

Body clenching

I see nothing.

Breathe

Deep breaths

Remember something

Memories

Happy laughter

Getting louder

I feel something.

Awake

Colors flashing

Lights soothing

Peace

Comfort resting

Mind freeing

I see something.

Silence

Pieces mending

Void filling

Joy

Trap breaking

People laughing

I hear something.

Note to reader:
Thank you so much for taking the time to read this poem.
I wanted to capture the ride of being pulled into and out of depression. This was outside of my comfort zone. Normally I love rhyming and I wanted to build skill outside of that.

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About the Creator

Ashley Shiflett

I have always had a passion for writing.

I hope to share my love for stories with everyone that I meet. I'm hopeful that in some way they will motivate you, help you smile, or even encourage you through a difficult time.

All are welcome!

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  • Test2 years ago

    I struggle with non rhyming poems, but I can see the lines 'I hear nothing, I see nothing, I remember something, I feel something, I see something, I hear something', tie it all together through the journey.

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Wonderful & inspirational!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Cathy holmes2 years ago

    That was amazing. It felt like being in a war zone, then he war ended. Really, really well done.

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