Fast
Fat
Falling
Lazy
Clean
Fluffy
Fractals
Infinite repetition
Each one unique.
None like the others
Not at all.
Slow
Heavy
Cold
Mounting
Piling
Beautifying
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All around sparkle lights of red and green
Running up to nestle snug and cozy in the gable
Of the tiny, frosted huts
The cutest collection I've ever seen
Piling high, shining against the darkened sky
Crystaline white
Prestine.
Eyes wander
Scents assault
And in the air
There's something there
A whisper and a shout
A sense that leaves no doubt
As the snow continues falling
Through the branches of a massive tree
The snow it lands on you my darling
As you smile up at me
Soon it will be Christmas time
And up on the ladder I'll then climb
To hang the mistletoe and steal a kiss
In the dark December bliss
But for now we remain
Standing in a picture frame
Hand in hand and heart in heart
Never to be torn apart
As first snow around us falls
As the Christmas bells begin to call.
All around us sparkle lights of red and green
You are the most beautiful that I have seen.
About the Creator
Alexander McEvoy
Writing has been a hobby of mine for years, so I'm just thrilled to be here! As for me, I love writing, dogs, and travel (only 1 continent left! Australia-.-)
"The man of many series" - Donna Fox
I hope you enjoy my madness
AI is not real art!
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Comments (25)
Hey, Merry Christmas in February! I feel the snowfall light and enclosed enchantment that had a lot of trouble coming. Almost no snow. Congrats on your win!
This is beautiful 🤩
So lovely and romantic with such a great flow! Congratulations!!
Back to say congrats, pal! It seems Vocal agreed that it was good you tapping into those romantic feelings. Was so happy to see this among the list and to share the winner's circle with you, Alex. Loved this piece and was a favourite first time I read it! Congrats!
Congratulations 🥳👏… wonderful! I was briefly transported to a snowy scape, far from this mild summer’s day in Oz.🙃
Lovely!!! Congratulations on the runner up win!!!❤️❤️💕
Congratulations on the win!! 🥳🥳🥳🥳
Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊
Congratulations on Runner Up - Well Deserved!!!
This is wonderful. Congrats 👏
Yay!!!! Congrats my writerly husband!! So proud of your honourable mention for this challenge!!! (And you think you're not a poet!!)
What a creative and imaginative poem. Congratulations on placing in the challenge with your amazing poetry.
This is so gorgeous. I especially adored that ending!
Your photo is great and so is your poem!💖
A delightful read✅❄️ My favourite bit… “As the snow continues falling Through the branches of a massive tree The snow it lands on you my darling As you smile up at me”🙃
Reminds me of the joy of early love in the snow :)
So atmospheric! I love this. That ending is so beautiful, Alex.
Awww, this was soooo wholesome and wonderfully magical! Such a beautiful poem!
Just lovely! A beautiful scene. Well Done!!!
What a beautiful scene you painted here, Alex!! It felt nostalgia and left me longing for the a magical moment like this!
Fluffy and really sweet, Alexander.
Warm and fluffy and full of lovely imagery. Well done!
Awww this is such a magical poem. Very beautiful 🩵❤️💚🤍
Yee ol' romantic you, Mr McEvoy. This is beautiful, but doesn't feel Hallmark beautiful, forced and strained. This feels real and is just making me ache from smiling! Well done, sir! Makes a stark contrast to my dark-as-shit poems for this challenge lol!
This makes me feel warm even as I am shivering. Lovely.