
Friend
This poem started as a challenge from my ex.
"Write a poem"
"About what?"
Glances around the garden where we were sitting
".......a snail"
So I did. Very quickly. And it ended up being one of the poems I'm most proud of. The ex is long gone, thank goodness. He was pretty awful. But the poem is a keeper.
Pride is not something that comes easily to me. Self esteem is something I like the idea of. But feel like the word play in this one is clever. It flows nicely. it's punny. I like it.
I hope you do too.
🐌
Snail slides silently
Trails pale slime
Shell spirals inwards
Onwards it climbs
With proverbial pace
One foot at a time
🐌
About the Creator
Jene Stone
Poet, performer, queer, disabled, lover of all things unusual


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