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smooth ruffled feathers

in the form of a villanelle

By Moon DesertPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
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still not enough to disclose despite

drowning in the black perfectness conquest

going ‘round rounded face and table trite

*

repeatedly showing a sly smile out of spite

the same contradictory words in one sentence egest

still not enough to disclose despite

*

supported by all this modern technology, a wounded wight

her mind lost in vain bequest

going ‘round rounded face and table trite

*

sat around, talked about, no delight

colloquialisms that obfuscate the professed

still not enough to disclose despite

*

then this man came, low-down, his eyes full of blight

pull out all the carefully laid out threads, what a jest

going ‘round rounded face and table trite

*

they both danced in the same team at the campsite

throwing an alien egg out of the nest

still not enough to disclose despite

going ‘round rounded face and table trite

***

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Moon Desert

UK-based

BA in Cultural Studies

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Crime Fiction: Love

Poetry: Friend

Psychology: Salvation

Where the wild roses grow full of words...

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  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Splendidly written!!! Love this!!!💕❤️❤️

  • This was so wonderful! Loved your villanelle!

  • Joe Patterson2 years ago

    Nice job.

  • This feels autobiographical, almost as though they might be your parents & you the alien egg. But you've presented it in such an epically mysterious way..., oh the stories it might inform.

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