Smoky Mirror Eyes
My limerick for a space Goddess Muse, introducing a ethereal alien to fresh snickerdoodle cookies & milk
The Milky Way galaxy is from where you beamed down,
Smoky Mirror Eyes, I was startled when I saw you, there was no sound
You looked funny as you tasted my icy milk and tender cookies, so oddly glum
You took my heart once we finished the dessert, a truly strange added sum
Then in a poof you left, just the crime leftovers of snickerdoodle crumbs settled in a smoky mound
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Oh no, why did they leave? Lol! Loved your limerick Merly!
oh, what a great mix
Fantastic!!! Loved it!!!♥️♥️💕
I♥️Snicker doodles- 👍 Great job friend❗
lol, Aliens and Limericks. "D
Nice, add a snickerdoodle and I am all in
They left snickerdoodles behind? They really are a different breed from the rest of us, lol.
I was thinking the same as Judey! :D
Ok- this is a mashup of the Mother Combs and Alien challenges?!
Nicely done.