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Raw meat mouth

Popee the Performer anime fan poem

By Melissa IngoldsbyPublished 2 years ago 1 min read

Clowning around cause I have no depth

The mask is dark

And I secretly wept

As the night bled into the sky

And you saw my dream in your reflection

A raw day ahead of us

And you used your words that felt like fists

To tear my heart apart

Did you know that my heart was resting in your scrappy hands?

Did you know that our desert was full of stars and planets and an oasis that I could only see?

My maternal raw meat mouth growled with furious excitement

As you gripped on to me

So tight, so soft

Oh God don’t let me forget

This humanity I have been suffering through

Raw meat mouth cuts me deeply,

My slinking hay-colored beauty…

Don’t let me collapse

Without sharing my love for you

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About the Creator

Melissa Ingoldsby

My work:

Patheos,

The Job, The Space Between Us, Green,

The Unlikely Bounty, Straight Love, The Heart Factory, The Half Paper Moon, I am Bexley and Atonement by JMS Books

Silent Bites by Eukalypto

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran2 years ago

    Words that felt like fists. I loved that line the most. Your poem was so emotional! I loved it so much Merly!

  • Yusuf Alam2 years ago

    👌👌👌

  • Babs Iverson2 years ago

    Left heartbroken!!! Boldly written!!!♥️♥️💕

  • Awesome pictures and an amazing piece of work 👍 ♥️🌈👌📝

  • "Clowning around cause I have no depth" You began with this which immediately triggered within me one of my favorite (& wife's least favorite) responses when someone asked how the two of us got married. (No, it's not immediately obvious--or even somewhat obvious over the long term--why someone like her would ever have had anything to do with someone like me, much less say yes.) My answer to their query? "She's blind in one eye (which is true) & can't tell that I have no depth." But then you bared your soul & went deep anyway, sharing the tentative intimations & longing of your heart with us. Nicely done. May your wish be granted & your love reciprocated.

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