Slow Mornings
The pleasures of being the first to awake
The world is quiet and just waking up
Nothing but the chirps of birds
the whoosh of early morning travelers
No noise in the house but my own thoughts
that emerge right after I awake
There's a peaceful quietness that exists
when you have the pleasure of being the first to awake
No interruptions of thoughts, no clattered rush in the kitchen
of clanking spoons and cereal bowls
or chatter from the T.V.
I bask in solitude and blissful peacefulness,
knowing it won't last long
I enjoy every second that passes by
The morning continues with a peaceful slowness,
a reminder there is no need rush
The first aroma of the day entices me
The robust smell of coffee freshly brewed
With each sip, I immerse myself in a sea of thoughts
words, ideas, stories I've been meaning to write
The world is quiet, no interruptions
New ideas form, new stories gain more words
My thoughts have a chance to emerge
I'm alone with my thoughts, diving deep into my creativity
As I take a slow sip of coffee now barely warm,
I hear the stir of the others, the chatter of voices
Another sip of coffee, another round of writing
As I savor just a few seconds more of solitude
About the Creator
Jasmine Aguilar
Fascinated by pop culture and its effect on society... movies, music, books.. and pretty much anything.
I love writing and write a little bit of everything including a science fiction WIP!
https://www.buymeacoffee.com/J.A.Rose
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Comments (5)
This poem is truly beautiful! May God bless you abundantly!
Superb gratitude poem!!!❤️❤️💕
This is such a beautiful poem!!!
This is me!
Solitude is so very important! Thoughtful, lovely verse