Sky Flash!
A Senryu for the Skyku Challenge
By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished about a year ago β’ 1 min read
Photo by David Menidrey on Unsplash
Hereβs another Haiku riddle, describing something in the sky thatβs difficult to see in our lifetimes. What might it be? Your answer in the comments (No, no, definitely wonβt find it in the picture).
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I course through dark skies,
Blazing past silent planets,
Vanish as they call.
What am I?
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.


Comments (9)
Comet
Hey, thanks, everyone for commenting!
Shooting Star! "They" being people making wishes
Comet was the first thing that came to my mind. Not sure if it's correct π
Wow, those are some fantastic lines! I found them really interesting.
It could be Tsuchinshan-Atlas, the "new" very old comet coming from Oort-cloud very far away, 3000 times the distance to Pluto, and it is supposed to be visible from october 12th until november 10th. The scientist think, it will never again visit the Earth and inner Solarsystem area, as it is probably thrown out of our solarsystem (vanishes)
Hey guys, thanks for visiting! Will respond to all answers a little later to give everyone some time to decipher this little Senryu!
I concur with Sam Harty - Haley's Comet only comes round every 75 years or so.....and managed to coincide with Mark Twain's life span.....right?
Haley's Comet? π€