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This is me
Blinking away darkness
Vomiting up soil
Cleaning the dirt out
From beneath my fingernails
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This is me
Tossing aside the shovel
Putting the moon back in the sky
And pointing my finger at you
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This is me baring me fangs
Shedding my decaying skin
And prying my ribcage open
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This is me
Revealing my beating heart
And the bruised handprint
You left on it
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This is me
Letting you live your
Pathetic life
Far away from me
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This is me
Picking up that shovel
Burying all your bitterness
And my resentment
In the grave you
Buried me in
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Poppy
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Comments (7)
Phew! The conclusion arrived at in the final stanza comes as a relief!✅
Stunning work
My favourite line was the bruised handprint on the heart and stanza was the last one!
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This one really resonated with me. Such elegant and powerful prose. I absolutely loved the strengthening voice throughout. Great job!
This is so deep and dark and painful. I felt a real sense of abuse and hurt and anger as I read this. Excellent job in conveying these different emotions.
The depths of bitterness can know no end.....this poem is poignant and vibrates within your reader's thoughts even after finishing it.