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You can write a poem
To him each night
Formulate a daydream
For him each window you gaze out
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You can immortalise him
In a painting of words and
A chorus of laments
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You can gaze at him
Like a constellation of stars
Mark out his flaws
Like charting a map
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You can, of course, love him
But that doesn’t mean you can have him
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(When have you ever held the things you love?)
About the Creator
Poppy
poetry in progress


Comments (8)
So true- beautifully heartbreaking- loved it!
Beautiful and sad. Loved the progression from each stanza to the next of different ways to be consumed with someone without actually having them
Beautifully written… as an optimist, surely there have been many times the last line has been true!🤔🙃
Now that is the story of my life. Loved your poem!
Ugh, that LAST LINE!
Love that poignant question, Poppy. Wish I had the answer to that! A thoughtful and well-written poem.
Oh damn Poppy!!! That was brilliant! Incredible! Poignant! And bone deeply tragic. Oh we’ve all been there. This is my new favourite poem you’ve ever written!
Ouch.... this was another beautifully heartbreaking piece Poppy!! So so good!