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Sitting There, He's Smiling

Oh No Please God Help Me

By C. Rommial ButlerPublished 3 years ago 1 min read

Earth, air, water, fire

Telling people their desire

No, wait, that's Satan

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Commentary: Only fans of Black Sabbath will get this...

But seriously:

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C. Rommial Butler

C. Rommial Butler is a writer, musician and philosopher from Indianapolis, IN. His works can be found online through multiple streaming services and booksellers.

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  • L.C. Schäferabout a year ago

    I loved it!

  • Was that Hereditary and Rosemary’s baby? Very good

  • This made me chuckle! Loved your Haiku!

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    I thought this was beautiful and thought-provoking. :) I'm not familiar with Black Sabbath but, I still really enjoyed this. :)

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