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Sisyphus Rising

An Acrostic about Freedom

By Maia Gadwall the metAlchemistPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
Top Story - November 2022
Sisyphus Rising
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Falling fast into the claws and

Ravenous jaws of the looming,

Ever-present machine feels all but inevitable.

Each of our steps is a backslide

Down the mountain like Sisyphus. It is

Only when we come to rest in the valley

Mired in grime and covered

In scars,

Some silver with age

And others fresh and pink

Like the tender flesh below, do we realize

It could never be done. Still, we must

Entertain the hope, the dream of

Better days. For where, if not

Under crushing pressure, does

The diamond form?

In the shadow of

The mountain, just beyond the peak,

Do you see the promised land

Of which the elders speak?

Eager to fulfill the destinies we

So desperately pursue, we must admit that

No one can accomplish such a daunting

Task alone. We must work together to

Have a chance

At overcoming the impossible;

Vanquishing this evil will take

Every single Sisyphus working in

Tandem. Together we can move the mountain itself.

Only when we combine our strengths can we

Become the mighty force that

Even Zeus must gaze upon it with awe and fear.

Purple Poetry // Sisyphus Rising

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Originally penned for a contest under the theme of freedom, this acrostic free verse poem explores the concept through the lens of a hopeful cynic. If you enjoyed this poem's contradictory perspective, you might enjoy Immortal Comfort or Internal Battle, which feature similarly conflicting points of view.

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About the Creator

Maia Gadwall the metAlchemist

I fell in love with speculative fiction and poetry many years ago, but I have precious little time to write any. Then, I went crazy and started a cult called metAlchemy, or meta alchemy. I revere energy of all brands, esp. good, kind chaos.

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  • Kayla McIntosh3 years ago

    Oh my gawd. Look at that design. This is beautiful work!

  • Great acrostic poem and message all the way around. As a lover of mythology, this really caught my fancy.

  • Miles Pen3 years ago

    AWESOME!

  • Emily Brandt3 years ago

    Beautiful work!

  • T3 years ago

    Hi Michelle, I loved reading this thanks for sharing, Ive never heard of sisyphus before. Im excited to learn more about him.

  • Karyn Savage3 years ago

    Wow! A brilliant free verse poem in its own right. Acrostic is next level!

  • Joseph McCall3 years ago

    Absolutely amazing

  • Heather Hubler3 years ago

    Congratulations on Top Story! You really used that acrostic effortlessly, and the message was powerful in its truth. Great work :)

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  • A.N.Tipton3 years ago

    Love this!

  • Gina C.3 years ago

    Impressive, deeply powerful poem! Congrats on the top story! :)

  • Congratulations on the Too story. This was so good 😊

  • Love it! It felt like a secret message.

  • A great set of words Michelle, think you may like Louise Distras

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