Sisyphus Rising
An Acrostic about Freedom
Falling fast into the claws and
Ravenous jaws of the looming,
Ever-present machine feels all but inevitable.
Each of our steps is a backslide
Down the mountain like Sisyphus. It is
Only when we come to rest in the valley
Mired in grime and covered
In scars,
Some silver with age
And others fresh and pink
Like the tender flesh below, do we realize
It could never be done. Still, we must
Entertain the hope, the dream of
Better days. For where, if not
Under crushing pressure, does
The diamond form?
In the shadow of
The mountain, just beyond the peak,
Do you see the promised land
Of which the elders speak?
Eager to fulfill the destinies we
So desperately pursue, we must admit that
No one can accomplish such a daunting
Task alone. We must work together to
Have a chance
At overcoming the impossible;
Vanquishing this evil will take
Every single Sisyphus working in
Tandem. Together we can move the mountain itself.
Only when we combine our strengths can we
Become the mighty force that
Even Zeus must gaze upon it with awe and fear.

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Originally penned for a contest under the theme of freedom, this acrostic free verse poem explores the concept through the lens of a hopeful cynic. If you enjoyed this poem's contradictory perspective, you might enjoy Immortal Comfort or Internal Battle, which feature similarly conflicting points of view.
About the Creator
Maia Gadwall the metAlchemist
I fell in love with speculative fiction and poetry many years ago, but I have precious little time to write any. Then, I went crazy and started a cult called metAlchemy, or meta alchemy. I revere energy of all brands, esp. good, kind chaos.
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Comments (14)
Oh my gawd. Look at that design. This is beautiful work!
Great acrostic poem and message all the way around. As a lover of mythology, this really caught my fancy.
AWESOME!
Beautiful work!
Hi Michelle, I loved reading this thanks for sharing, Ive never heard of sisyphus before. Im excited to learn more about him.
Wow! A brilliant free verse poem in its own right. Acrostic is next level!
Absolutely amazing
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Love this!
Impressive, deeply powerful poem! Congrats on the top story! :)
Congratulations on the Too story. This was so good 😊
Love it! It felt like a secret message.
A great set of words Michelle, think you may like Louise Distras