Silence in Minor
Exiting the Noise. Letter to the Moon.

Dear Mother Moon,
How are you on this glorious, radiant Luna eve
How serene and tranquil is your aura tonight
Unperturbed, you distil soporific, calming light
Bathing me in a pure and serene ambience.
I know that it has been a while since I visited
Please forgive my tardiness in paying homage
to your magnificence...But, you see
I have this need to walk and speak with you,
While basking in your soothing, somnolent beauty.
For lately...I find the world perturbing and disturbing
It has become so loud...so excruciatingly resounding.
Even in the stillness of sleep...It roars.
Becoming so thunderous!
I scream in silent agony
Finding myself wanting - needing...
Desperately, to step outside of the noise
Beyond the clamor and the roars
Beyond the summons of want - Just...
Out There...Where I find silence waiting
And the air beyond has its own texture...
Like wading into a gentle creek or stream
Where only my breathing speaks in volumes
Out here...where I am ME - Unvarnished
Unencumbered
Without the need to display, compare or explain.
Just me...Existing.
I find that with you by my side - Mother, I can go
Gently stepping through jagged chaos
Into many a serene, golden landscape,
Walking beside myself, barefoot and breathing...
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I have the need to step out - not away - but through
Through the static that clings like burrs to my skin,
through the chorus of shoulds and the clatter of clocks
that mistake urgency for desperation.
The noise has teeth,. Silence has breath.
And I followed it , like a thread pulled from the hem
of my own unraveling.
Out here, the wind doesn’t ask for credentials.
The sky doesn’t compare my ache to anyone else’s.
Even the trees forget my name
and still offer shade

Poised, radiant, and moon-kissed, my attire sways with quiet dignity, my heels tap a rhythm only the stars understand, and my letter to Mother Moon glows with the yearning of wisdom.
I walk with feet dusted in silver, writing each step as a syllable,
each breath a line you’ve already read.
Your light does not interrogate - it listens.
It gathers my scattered thoughts like fallen petals
and presses them into quiet bloom.
I tell you of the ache that wears no name,
of the joy that startles like a child’s laugh in the dark.
You do not answer.
You reflect.
And in your silence, I remember how to be whole
Without needing to be loud.

I smile...walking in grace, luminous, and deep in communion with the night. The moonlight wraps around me with a gentle recognition, and my letter unfolds like a spell.
I am content.
Thank you Mother Moon - for your silent dignity.
Yours, with love.
Your lost, found child.
About the Creator
Novel Allen
You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.
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Comments (33)
Congratulations, Novel!!! I loved this: "And in your silence, I remember how to be whole Without needing to be loud"
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Love your use of somnolent excellent piece! Congrats!!
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Love your gratitude poem!!! Fabulous ending!!! Congratulations on the WIN!!!
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Moonbeams carry the soul as we say thank you moon for the beams. Your story is beautiful 💜🌹🌹
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