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Silence in Minor

Exiting the Noise. Letter to the Moon.

By Novel AllenPublished 4 months ago 2 min read
Winner in Letters to the Moon Challenge

Dear Mother Moon,

How are you on this glorious, radiant Luna eve

How serene and tranquil is your aura tonight

Unperturbed, you distil soporific, calming light

Bathing me in a pure and serene ambience.

I know that it has been a while since I visited

Please forgive my tardiness in paying homage

to your magnificence...But, you see

I have this need to walk and speak with you,

While basking in your soothing, somnolent beauty.

For lately...I find the world perturbing and disturbing

It has become so loud...so excruciatingly resounding.

Even in the stillness of sleep...It roars.

Becoming so thunderous!

I scream in silent agony

Finding myself wanting - needing...

Desperately, to step outside of the noise

Beyond the clamor and the roars

Beyond the summons of want - Just...

Out There...Where I find silence waiting

And the air beyond has its own texture...

Like wading into a gentle creek or stream

Where only my breathing speaks in volumes

Out here...where I am ME - Unvarnished

Unencumbered

Without the need to display, compare or explain.

Just me...Existing.

I find that with you by my side - Mother, I can go

Gently stepping through jagged chaos

Into many a serene, golden landscape,

Walking beside myself, barefoot and breathing...

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I have the need to step out - not away - but through

Through the static that clings like burrs to my skin,

through the chorus of shoulds and the clatter of clocks

that mistake urgency for desperation.

The noise has teeth,. Silence has breath.

And I followed it , like a thread pulled from the hem

of my own unraveling.

Out here, the wind doesn’t ask for credentials.

The sky doesn’t compare my ache to anyone else’s.

Even the trees forget my name

and still offer shade

Poised, radiant, and moon-kissed, my attire sways with quiet dignity, my heels tap a rhythm only the stars understand, and my letter to Mother Moon glows with the yearning of wisdom.

I walk with feet dusted in silver, writing each step as a syllable,

each breath a line you’ve already read.

Your light does not interrogate - it listens.

It gathers my scattered thoughts like fallen petals

and presses them into quiet bloom.

I tell you of the ache that wears no name,

of the joy that startles like a child’s laugh in the dark.

You do not answer.

You reflect.

And in your silence, I remember how to be whole

Without needing to be loud.

I smile...walking in grace, luminous, and deep in communion with the night. The moonlight wraps around me with a gentle recognition, and my letter unfolds like a spell.

I am content.

Thank you Mother Moon - for your silent dignity.

Yours, with love.

Your lost, found child.

Free VerseGratitude

About the Creator

Novel Allen

You can only become truly accomplished at something you love. (Maya Angelou). Genuine accomplishment is not about financial gain, but about dedicating oneself to activities that bring joy and fulfillment.

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  • Shirley Belkabout a month ago

    Congratulations, Novel!!! I loved this: "And in your silence, I remember how to be whole Without needing to be loud"

  • Grz Colm2 months ago

    Wow! Congrats Novel! ☺️🎉🎉

  • Gina C.2 months ago

    Amazing poem, Novel!! Congratulations, I am so happy for you! ☺️💙 Richly deserved!

  • Antoni De'Leon2 months ago

    Oh my cuz...hearty congrats on a well deserved win. Champagne all around. 🍾🍾🍾🍾🤸‍♀️🤸‍♀️🤸‍♀️🤸‍♀️🤸‍♀️

  • John R. Godwin2 months ago

    What a cool and unique poem. I love the graphics with language that echoes, but not entirely, the language in the poem. The word choice and line breaks are purposeful and create a lovely, languid flow. This is highly creative and definitely deserving of your win. Congratulations!

  • PK Colleran2 months ago

    Back to say. "I'm so happy you won!" Congratulations, Novel. Beautiful writing.

  • K.B. Silver 2 months ago

    absolutely beautiful, congrats on the win👏👏👏

  • Lamar Wiggins2 months ago

    👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽👏🏽 Yes!!! So happy for you, Novel! Truly sublime work! So glad it was recognized! 🤩

  • Congratulations on your well-deserved win.

  • The Dani Writer2 months ago

    Oh my GOOD. NESSSSS! Such beauty in poetic form! And your media takes expression to next levels Novel. Amazing! My favourite lines: "The noise has teeth,. Silence has breath." It speaks to the way I and many have been feeling, craving a quiet that the world expelled without our consent. Kudos to you on your win 🎉👏🏾🎉

  • Imola Tóth2 months ago

    Congratulations on your win, Novel! 🎉

  • Tiffany Gordon2 months ago

    Screaming Congratulations from the Northwest corner of the U-ee No! So stoked for you! 😁 You truly deserve your time in the sun! May many more blessings visit your doorstep! Love ya Sis! 💕 No's ✒️game is strong! Go gurl! 🫶🏾💪🏾☺️🥰🎉🥳

  • Wooohooooo congratulations on your win! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Melissa Ingoldsby2 months ago

    Love your use of somnolent excellent piece! Congrats!!

  • 💜🙏🏼💜Wow & Congratulations on your win: "Letters to the Moon!" Look at You, setting the Vocal literary world on fire. I am thrilled for You, Novel! 💜🔥💜

  • Babs Iverson2 months ago

    Love your gratitude poem!!! Fabulous ending!!! Congratulations on the WIN!!!

  • Darkos2 months ago

    Congratulations, so Happy for You:)))))))))))) so beautiful!

  • Hope Martin3 months ago

    Lovely. Breath taking.

  • Imola Tóth4 months ago

    Congrats on your TS 🎉🎉

  • Moonbeams carry the soul as we say thank you moon for the beams. Your story is beautiful 💜🌹🌹

  • PK Colleran4 months ago

    Lovely letter to the moon. Worthy Top Story. Congratulations.

  • Krysha Thayer4 months ago

    What a deep connection with the moon to share such thoughts. Congrats on Top Story!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Tiffany Gordon4 months ago

    Phenomenal writing Novel! This was so sweet! ☺️ Splendid work No! Congrats on your well-deserved Top Story! 🫶🏾🩷🌸

  • Sean A.4 months ago

    Beautifully done!

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