
The silence slithers, soft and thick,
It wraps your bones, it makes them stick.
It pulls you deep beneath your skin,
A trembling thought—a deathly grin.
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It gnaws your thoughts, it gnashes dreams,
A whispered hiss that splits the seams.
The flesh it tears, it peels, it flays,
And still the silence stays, and stays.
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The heart beats fast, but slows, it cracks,
Each pulse a throb, each thought attacks.
It digs beneath, it eats the mind,
A hollow scream you cannot find.
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The eyes, they tear, they melt, they drip,
The mouth, it cracks, the teeth slip.
The blood runs thick, a poisoned flow,
A choking flood, but none will know.
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It pulls the soul through gaping holes,
It writhes inside, it steals your roles.
The scream, it dies, the throat it snaps,
As silence swallows all that’s trapped.
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The limbs grow stiff, the skin decays,
The body sinks in dreamless haze.
It pulls you in—no voice, no choice,
But hollow breath and broken voice.
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And when the dawn begins to rise,
The silence grips with blinding eyes.
No sound to wake, no cry, no pain,
Just endless whisper—still—again.
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Comments (6)
This is great Jason!!❤️
Wow! This is incredible♥️
Oh Gosh! Jason! This reminds me of that horror story you wrote where the people become the demons but it also reminds me of a fight against addiction and the silence in not sharing or accepting and it just eats you alive. This poem is so emotive. Well done!
I love silence! An amazing poem! Great work!
There is a rhythm to silence that one must follow as well as to the rhythm of this poem. Hope this makes sense. Good job.
You have written and I noted captures of the haunting and oppressive nature of silence with vivid, evocative imagery. Emotional and psychological turmoil. I like this poem