She Only Had Herself
A Diminishing Verse Poem
Wishes were for Genies to grant
For now, she could only rant
Everything seemed too big for an ant
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Her brain ran out of space
Her problems made her pace
To calm her mind, she needed to ace
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She was fidgety as she sat on the chair
Lost her marbles, wanted to yank out her hair
Then surmised she needed some air
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Going outdoors was overwhelming to start
So instead she would bake a tart
On it, she would design some art
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She invited her best friend over for a chat
Baked the tart after putting on her chef's hat
Her design on it was pulchritudinous to look at
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She put the piquant tart on a plate
Her friend didn't show up, it was getting late
In the end, alone she ate
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The Diminishing Verse Poem is commonly written in tercets (three lines in each stanza)
The last word of each line gradually “diminishes” from one line to the next, usually by removing one or two letters from the beginning of the word.
An example of this would be the transition from “smart” to “mart” to “art”.
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Comments (135)
“All my loneliness,” says a song. A tart? And you ate it alone? Now you’ll see. I’m off for French fries with cheese, and a strawberry milkshake.:)
When our problems overwhelm us, art and friendship can provide relief. Challenges are faced with creativity, as beautifully suggested in your artistic poem. :)
A realistic journey through her mind and the way she’s feeling. I love the flow and the way we went from, grant, rant to ant. Telling us that she feels spent, a feeling I am too familiar with. Needing to do something that would guarantee success is so relatable. How she couldn’t sit still, needing to go outside. I like the story that is unfolding. The ending was sad. I also noticed that the last line of each stanza… the word at the end of the last line starts with an ‘a’ that is sooo cool 👏🏽👌🏽♥️🤗
Love this🤍 love the rhythm of it and it seems fun. Might give this form a try.
Beautiful work. I really like the structure and rhyming pattern of this poem.
Right timing for me, finding it long after others did. This is inspiring! ⚡♥️⚡
Hey, this was fun! And yes, I was sad for her. So alone.
This is very creative <3 Great Poetry -You are an amazing writer <3
Keep giving and present what's new now
It's interesting and creative. Keep posting more
the poem was well done and enjoyable to read.
Wonderfully written you beautiful writer ✍🏽
OH. EMM. GEE! This is incredibly awesome! *Wowed* *Wants to try it but will take some time to get over my 'wowed-ness'* Thank you so much for writing and sharing this! 😍
Hi Dharrsheena Not only did I become absorbed by the heartbreak depicted by your unique voice. Once again I learned something! The Diminshing Verse Poem. Pauline 🌸
wow, its so beautiful.
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Wow! This was wonderful. Again something I have never heard of! You are so talented!
This is so cool! Especially loved this part: "She was fidgety as she sat on the chair Lost her marbles, wanted to yank out her hair Then surmised she needed some air" Nice work!
beautiful poem..... Really lovely and the last line at the end just left me speechless ..." nice, keep it up, a great piece...
I never seen this type of poem before. That is a talent to write, for it to make sense and come together as one piece. The last three lines tied it all up.
Congratulations on the Creator of the Year Dharrsheena and for being such a Great Supporter for all of us ! 🥰❤️💞💞💞💞💞
Wow! New poem to me. Thank you for that. Well written too. BEST!
Well written. Never heard of such a poem before. Thank you for introducing it to me (us).
This describes both the loneliness and self-isolation of an anxiety-ridden mind perfectly. Bravo!
Wonderful work!