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Separate Stars & Worlds

A breakup "nonet" love poem

By Gina C.Published about a year ago 1 min read
Second Place in Breakup Nonet Challenge
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Your bioluminescence stopped my

heartbeats. Eyes of fireflies: coasts of

ardor / foreign dreams. As one,

we plucked oysters from the

wild’s whorls - strung our pearls…

then were flung to

separate

stars and

worlds.

*

-Gina C. 🧚🏻‍♀️✨

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Gina C.

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Sowing stories rooted in culture, origin, metamorphosis, resilience, language & love via fantasy, myth, magical realism & botanical prose

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  • Arshad Ali9 months ago

    Aweosme to read "Love is not only in the light, it deepens in the silence of the night. "Good night" is said in silence most of all."

  • John Cox11 months ago

    The nonet is such a tricky poetic form, but you have employed it with great effect in this brush with love in all its fleeting intensity! Congrats on placing! Richly deserved. I love the pic too!

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  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    This is such an amazing poem, love hog vivid it is.

  • Testabout a year ago

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  • Testabout a year ago

    i love this

  • Len Leiabout a year ago

    Congratulations! Love the perspective

  • Pamela Walsh-Holteabout a year ago

    Beautiful, just beautiful, Congratulations on your win.

  • Congratulations on placing in the challenge. I love “ Eyes of fireflies”💙.

  • RPabout a year ago

    Congratulations!!! 🎉

  • Poppy about a year ago

    This is utterly gorgeous and I'm so glad it placed!!💛

  • Heather Zieffle about a year ago

    Congratulations! This is a beautiful nonet!

  • J. R. Loweabout a year ago

    This has such a beautiful rhythm to it and paints a really magical picture despite the sad prompt behind it. Congratulations on a well deserved win Gina!!

  • Ava Mackabout a year ago

    Congrats on your second place, Gina!

  • Paul Stewartabout a year ago

    Welllllllllllll look at you, Ms second placer. Con-bloody-grats, Gi-bloody-na! :)

  • Amanda Starksabout a year ago

    Oh my god, this is STUNNING, Gina!!! The descriptions of light and movement combined with the "stringing of pearls" and the ending...wow, I could gush. Amazing job!! <3

  • Lamar Wigginsabout a year ago

    🤩💯 So happy for you, Gina! I knew this one was a contender the first time I read it! Super congrats to you!!!

  • The Dani Writerabout a year ago

    Oh my "stars and worlds!" This is REALLY good Gina! Congratulations on placing in the challenge! You've done us all proud! 💙

  • Kayleigh Fraser ✨about a year ago

    I’m so happy to see you place in a challenge win, Gina. Your poetry deserves to be on a pedestal 🥹🌟💜

  • Cindy Calderabout a year ago

    Back to say "Congratulations" on your win - I love your beautiful nonet.

  • Mackenzie Davisabout a year ago

    Beautiful!! That rhythm is sublime, Gina. Congratulations! 🥳

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Damn you got it! You deserve this win. You’re a legend and a true poet!! Congratulations 🎊

  • Heather Hublerabout a year ago

    Woohoo!! Congrats on 2nd place, my dear talented friend!!

  • Cathy holmesabout a year ago

    You absolute legend!!! Wtg my friend. I'm so happy for you.

  • Testabout a year ago

    Congratulations on second place!!!!🥈

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