Tears of Rain
A breakup "nonet" love poem
By Gina C.Published about a year ago • Updated about a year ago • 1 min read
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All was foggy when I met you. To
fall in love, I fluttered to cloud
9, sipped on the wispy haze
of you - caught flame (within)
the skyline's plane. Then
you vaporized,
and I cried
tears of
rain.
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-Gina C. 🧚🏻♀️✨
About the Creator
Gina C.
Poet | Author | Architect of Worlds
Sowing stories rooted in culture, origin, metamorphosis, resilience, language & love via fantasy, myth, magical realism & botanical prose
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Outstanding
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Excellent storytelling
Original narrative & well developed characters
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Comments (8)
Wow deep 💧💧💧
Oooo, the vaporisation and tears of rain was so brilliant! Loved it so much!
You were allocating the heart throughout the poem.
Such beautiful visuals you created in this poem, well done!!
Excellent lines
Such powerful sky imagery! Loved “found cloud 9 - sipped on the wispy haze of you”
"sipped on the wispy haze of you" . . . what a powerful line! Great Nonet, Gina!
This was so very moving. You make tragedy sound beautiful :)