Sensory Serenade
The Bodies Creative Communications
Shadows dance in veiled sunlight
weaving ways through groves of trees
Sight and sound together ignite
imaginations on the breeze
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Sunset yields itself to moonlight
colors vibrantly explode
Bringing wonder awe and delight
nature’s senses overload
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Misty rain to feed the flowers
goosebumps rise to meet the chill
Wind and rain mingle in showers
till every sense has been fulfilled
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Birds and crickets serenading
owl’s and whippoorwills in tune
Send melodies across the water
frogs, duck, cranes and English loon
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The way the body receives signals
sight, sound and smell, touching and taste
Like waves beginning from a ripple
each co-exist and interlaced
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The smell the rain leaves as it’s falling
the taste of salt in crashing waves
The warmth of sunshine softly calling
sight and sounds alone, cannot contain
About the Creator
Kelli Sheckler-Amsden
Telling stories my heart needs to tell <3 life is a journey, not a competition
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Compelling and original writing
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Comments (13)
Brilliant & beautiful!!!💖💖💕
Your rhyming and rhythm is getting so much better! Well done. Some beautiful images in this!
Gorgeous poem.
Reading this poem while sitting on my porch and it is about to rain is so fitting. Beautiful and engaging. ❤️
I really do miss the sense of smell, whether it be of falling rain or fresh baking bread. (No, not Covid. Two sinus surgeries.) Mesmerizing is almost but not quite the word I would use for this. Sensual might come closer, sweeping us dreamily through a wonder of sensual delights in the broader, though similarly ecstatic, sense of the word/phrase.
I love the title, the poem brilliant as always 🥰
Beautiful and mesmerising!
Gorgeous!
Sublime, Kelli!
Gorgeous, Kelli!! 😍😍 I loved this so much, "Misty rain to feed the flowers goosebumps rise to meet the chill Wind and rain mingle in showers till every sense has been fulfilled" 😍😍😍😍
Nicely done, Kelli!
Some wonderful sensory words
Oh my gosh, this challenge was made for you. 👏👏👏. That was exquisite.