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Self-Portrait in Cliché

Poem. 33rd Rejection.

By Paul StewartPublished about a month ago 1 min read
Self-Portrait in Cliché
Photo by Kenny Eliason on Unsplash

I wear my shame like a cliché around my neck

I hold aloft my desire like a forced metaphor

My time spent wallowing in the, no not mire

There is an art to writing without it sounding

out in every line as art, and not just

the thoughts of your mind. My shame is my skin

My desire is my sin.

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Paul Stewart

Award-Winning Writer, Poet, Scottish-Italian, Subversive.

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  • Mark Grahamabout a month ago

    Your writing always gives one a lot to think about one way or another. Great job.

  • ThatWriterWomanabout a month ago

    God, I am reading through some vocal stories I missed, and may I say people are ON FIRE this Autumn! You very much included Paul!! Excellent visceral language in this one!

  • L.C. Schäferabout a month ago

    MY SHAME IS MY SKIN good lord I love that

  • Gabriel Huizengaabout a month ago

    Concise, raw, eloquent, brilliant. This is another favorite of mine from among the treasure trove of your work, Paul. I resonate with the struggle you share here, too.

  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarranabout a month ago

    "My shame is my skin My desire is my sin." I loved these lines a lot Sir Paul. I'm so sorry about the rejection. Sending you lots of love and hugs ❤️

  • D. J. Reddallabout a month ago

    Never despair, my liege. It is enough to try to make meaning.

  • Sid Aaron Hirjiabout a month ago

    the last two lines were powerful, my friend

  • Harper Lewisabout a month ago

    Love the enjambment, and been there with shame (until I finally rejected it).

  • Sam Spinelliabout a month ago

    I don’t know why but I love the format here, how your line breaks are kind of interrupting the flow of thought, feels totally authentic to how my brain works and how chain of thought is often a little disjointed. Great impact!

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