Seize the moment.
A reminder to treasure each passing second.
Life ebbs like the tide, Moments slip away like sand, Cherish every grain.
This is my second Haiku. My previous attempt may not have been eligible, as I mistakenly posted an entire story and may have put it in the wrong category as well... But im excited to share this new creation with you. Life ebbs like the tide, and moments slip away like sand. So let's cherish every grain, for each second is precious and fleeting. Thank you for taking the time to read and appreciate this reminder to seize the moment. And if you have the time, check out my other post where I put more time into making it something more personal.
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Thomas Fitzpatrick
Aspiring writer and poet with a passion for crafting beautiful verses that capture the essense of life. Writing is my escape, my passion, and my purpose. Through my words, I hope to inspire, uplift, and connect with others on a deeper level
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Eternal Flow, Revised
Tick-tock, time flows on, Moments fleeting, never gone, Embrace each new dawn. This is the revised version of my previous haiku, where I mistakenly posted it into the motivational group, along with a story I wrote because upon putting it into "motivational" it said I needed 600 words. So, I created a story that went along with my haiku. If you want to check out said story its on my page. I think this haiku achieves it's intended purpose. As it focuses on nature, and captures a feeling in a concise and evocative way. The sunset represents time, because it marks the end of a day and the transition into night, symbolizing the passing of time. As the sun sets, it casts a warm glow over the landscape, creating a beautiful and fleeting moment that reminds us of the transience of life.
By Thomas Fitzpatrick3 years ago in Poets
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