Eternal Flow, Revised

Tick-tock, time flows on, Moments fleeting, never gone, Embrace each new dawn.

This is the revised version of my previous haiku, where I mistakenly posted it into the motivational group, along with a story I wrote because upon putting it into "motivational" it said I needed 600 words. So, I created a story that went along with my haiku. If you want to check out said story its on my page. I think this haiku achieves it's intended purpose. As it focuses on nature, and captures a feeling in a concise and evocative way. The sunset represents time, because it marks the end of a day and the transition into night, symbolizing the passing of time. As the sun sets, it casts a warm glow over the landscape, creating a beautiful and fleeting moment that reminds us of the transience of life.