Sedona Summit Ouch

((high-ku challenge))

By MorganaPublished 3 years ago • Updated 3 years ago • 1 min read

Drank the summit sun,

danced—a cactus bit my leg.

Hobbled down, humbled.

Babs Iverson3 years ago
Fabulous, simply fabulous!!!
M3 years ago
Great poem
Abigail Penhallegon3 years ago
I like the image of the cactus biting your leg. It’s so much more intentional than you just running into it and getting pricked. Mean cactus.
T. R.3 years ago
The memories this brings back :D great haiku!