Second Glance
a poem
Butterflies can’t compare
To the ocean–
.
A gravity deeper than the sea
Pulled in toward the earth
.
When you look at me
About the Creator
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Standing While Falling
Quotation from Friedrich Nietzsche "He who wrestles long with monsters should beware lest he himself become a monster. And if you gaze long into an abyss, the abyss also gazes into you. Man is not destroyed by suffering, but by the meaning he makes of it."
By LUCCIAN LAYTH4 days ago in Critique
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Congrats on Top Story! :)
Nice Work. I enjoyed your poem very much. Let me know your thoughts on my work, open to constuctive feedback.
Short and powerful!! Congrats on the top story!
Oops, contest on TS🎉🫶🏻
Beautiful!! Simple and perfect. 😍
Oh, this is beautiful. I really love it 🥹
Beautiful work!
Congratulations on top story!!
Short, but astounding. Beautifully written, Joelle!
Love the power of this, excellent!
Lovely and powerful end!!