i wanna close my eyes
close my eyes and dream
i wanna close my eyes
and build by hand a unique scream
i wanna arch my neck straight up
and expose the whole of my throat
a yell so loud from the depths of my lungs
so as to emit all that i wish to emote
i will physically take control of my diaphragm
i will now do exactly as i fucking want and please
inhalation and exhalation i am your fucking expiration
down in utter reverence on torn and bended knees
i am the control of the everything
i am the dream machine and the tool
i am the now and the eventual zen
i am a part of the sun and pretty much all of the fool
i will control the powers i will need to use
this my malignant egg to hatch
i will drug me then i’ll fuck you
i will build my screams from scratch
About the Creator
Bren
"It's just a token of my extreme!" - Frank Zappa
"Cause it's all in the heat of the moment It's all in the pain!!!" - Devin Townsend
Centre Stage with the wonderful Heather Hubler
I'm writing it out not acting in doubt!
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Excellent work. Looking forward to reading more!
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Comments (3)
Oof, this was freaking powerful and liberating! This is one of my favourites of yours now!
Fucken hell Brenton. Wow. Brilliant from start to finish. And this, i wanna arch my neck straight up and expose the whole of my throat a yell so loud from the depths of my lungs so as to emit all that i wish to emote It doesn’t get any more beautiful 🖤
Harrowing!--what an itch.