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Scars in Silver

Writing to the witness in the sky

By Alain SUPPINIPublished 4 months ago 1 min read

Dear Moon,

You have followed me longer than my own shadow.

I write to you tonight not as a poet,

but as someone who has run out of places to confess.

You are older than every wound,

yet you wear them openly —

your scars carved into silver,

your face turned again and again

to remind us that imperfection can shine.

Do you remember

when I first whispered into your light?

It was the summer I thought love would last forever,

and the winter I learned it wouldn’t.

Both nights, you were there,

the same coin flipped to show

that joy and grief come from the same sky.

I envy your patience.

While we build and ruin and forget,

you simply remain —

changing without apology,

waning without shame,

returning without excuse.

So here is my small request:

keep watching.

When I lose my way,

be the lantern above fields and rivers.

When I fall quiet,

translate my silence into tides.

When I am gone,

hold the memory of my name

in your cold, eternal mouth of light.

And if anyone asks about me,

tell them not what I did,

but how often I looked up —

and waited for your reply.

Yours,

always,

the one who keeps writing upward.

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About the Creator

Alain SUPPINI

I’m Alain — a French critical care anesthesiologist who writes to keep memory alive. Between past and present, medicine and words, I search for what endures.

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  • Vicki Lawana Trusselli 4 months ago

    well done!

  • Julie Lacksonen4 months ago

    You nailed the challenge! Well done. 🤩

  • Teresa Renton4 months ago

    ‘ imperfection can shine’ so true! Lovely reflections on accepting, embracing, the varied facets of life with no shame. We could all learn from the unapologetic embodiment of just being who we are, as depicted by the moon. Wonderful poem 😊

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