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Sailors' Dream

My first sonnet (written when I was a 4th grader)

By Christy MunsonPublished 2 years ago Updated 2 years ago 1 min read
Sailors' Dream
Photo by Torsten Dederichs on Unsplash

Saltwater batters the crag with great force

Knowing of danger men set out to sea

They started their journey bearing due north

Their voyage risky as any could be

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Murky, deep waters could steal a man’s soul

Many a vessel’s been swallowed by waves

A hard life to hack, adrift in the cold

So many men lost to bottomless graves

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Sailors who ventured for glory survived

In tales of excitement, treasures unearthed

Poseidon conjured the tempest: “Arise!”

Claimed, for the taking, great men from their berth

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Legend portends that the sailors were wrong

But who are we to judge those who are gone?

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Copyright © 03/02/2024 by Christy Munson. All rights reserved.

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Author's note: I did not know it at the time, but 9-year-old me was channeling a very popular tune from my childhood, "The Wreck of the Edmund Fitzgerald." Many of you likely remember it too. I can only hope my sonnet honors the song, the true story behind it, and the families and friends affected to this day by the losses.

Shout out to Gordon Lightfoot. And a moment of silence for the 29 sailors lost in the wreck.

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  • Kendall Defoe 2 years ago

    Better than mine!

  • Margaret Brennan2 years ago

    Reminds me of the Andrea Gail. So sad. Yet, you captured it so beautifully.

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