Sacrificial Elements
Turn away...there's chemistry and kissing involved
Oxygen leaves birthed
swirls mid-air for final kiss
Spreads dead red, old gold
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I love how you described leaves as “oxygen leaves birthed”—it turns nature into something almost alchemical.
Ooh, the final kiss, I love that. Great work!
Just for the subtitle I give this all the stars and votes in the world. Love the giggles it stirred in me. The last line will forever have my heart. Especially since there are similar letters within each word, and hearing them together as I say them, gave me the sense of all coming to an end quickly. Awesome work, Dani 🤗❤️
Beautiful, simply beautiful, Dani!❤
Stunning work Dani! 💪🏾🍂🧡🫶🏾
☺️ Final kiss! Like that line a lot, Dani.
Whoaaaa, this was mindblowing! Such a brilliant take on the challenge!
This one has life and emotion. I can feel it.
Vivid, real and with movement. Beautiful