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creeping futilities

By angela hepworthPublished about a year ago 1 min read
Top Story - December 2024

running was easy

easy to do and easy to feel

the briskness of it—wind

in my hair, carrying my body

through the world without a glance

back, without a thing to feel besides

the chill of winter on the skin

but emotions festering, rotting in

the chambers of this soul, could not

be outrun; the creep of them was slow

and dark, chasing me down

as I ran from them, from myself

until I couldn’t anymore, and here

they stayed, and here they are

with me, and I couldn’t feel

them until I could, and now

I cannot run from them

any longer

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angela hepworth

Hello! I’m Angela and I enjoy writing fiction, poetry, reviews, and more. I delve into the dark, the sad, the silly, the sexy, and the stupid. Come check me out!

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  • WOAabout a year ago

    Your use of enjambment really brings out the strong emotions in this piece and brings the reader close to you. Congratulations on Top Story, it's very deserved.

  • Annie Kapurabout a year ago

    Congrats on the Top Story! Very very well deserved ❤️💫

  • Jui Hanabout a year ago

    Tired feet. What are you carrying? Congratulations for top spot! ♥

  • Taylor Wardabout a year ago

    Ah the peace in acceptance 😌 excellent

  • D.K. Shepardabout a year ago

    Ah the stillness of acceptance. Well done, angela! And congrats on Top Story

  • Gregory Paytonabout a year ago

    Congratulations on Top Story!!!

  • the story says that how's wrters felt on his daily basis life and its like a drained scenario for her but despite that she's still keeps on going and striving to be better soon

  • Melissa Ingoldsbyabout a year ago

    Very sensory driven prose that feels like a dreamy story

  • ItsJimFaabout a year ago

    Great poet

  • Tiffany Gordonabout a year ago

    Brilliant writing!

  • CgtWritingabout a year ago

    Running faster and faster yet they always seem to be there. Amazing poem

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    Back to say Congrats on Top Story!! 💌🎉🥳🎉🥳🎉🥳🎉

  • Stella Yan PhDabout a year ago

    the faster you run, the deeper you rot, how true..

  • Rachel Steinmetzabout a year ago

    This feeling, of trying to run from life, is all too familiar. You brought out this emotion beautifully! Well done!

  • Back to say congratulations on your Top Story! 🎉💖🎊🎉💖🎊

  • Testabout a year ago

    I love the way you write. Keep it up!

  • Ignited Mindsabout a year ago

    A poignant reflection on running from emotions and facing inner truths. Deeply impactful.

  • Kodahabout a year ago

    Internal struggle is real. I wish more people took it seriously. Incredibly done, Angela! 💌

  • Shirley Belkabout a year ago

    Reminds me of my younger days...I had great talks with God and He showed me so much in nature when I'd go running

  • Oooo, this was so profound and relatable. Loved your poem!

  • Hannah Mooreabout a year ago

    Then run WITH them. Excellent.

  • L.I.Eabout a year ago

    Sigh, felt this deeply. Its hard to run and its not always good to ignore the things that are causing us negative feelings and negative things/difficult things. We have to deal with them, before the deal with us. Your poem captures it well.

  • D. J. Reddallabout a year ago

    We cannot evade ourselves; an eternal theme, given new vitality by this poem!

  • Caroline Cravenabout a year ago

    This was so good. I love running- I always joke it’s because I love running away from responsibilities, crimes and relationships! I really feel like you’ve captured those feelings of futility and helplessness.

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