Raging rivers run
Rawly, relentlessly rushing
Raucously rattling rocks
Ripping, roaring, ravenous reapers
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Submitted to the Tautogram Challenge. This one should be fun!
Thanks for reading my random ramblings!
About the Creator
Dana Crandell
Dad, Stepdad, Grandpa, Husband, lover of Nature and dogs.
Poet, Writer, Editor, Photographer, Artist and Tech/Internet nerd.
My first published poetry collection: Life, Love & Ludicrosity
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By LUCCIAN LAYTH5 days ago in Critique
Comments (11)
Great imagery, Dana!
Fun!!! Fun read too!!! Loving it!!!
ramble on raging rivers, nice ramble buddy
This puts Sally seashells to shame. Outstanding work!
Wonderful! This has such a power to it ❤️
Very nice imagery
Riveting imagery! Really well done!
This tautogram challenge intimidates me! You did great, perfectly capturing the beauty and danger of a river. I could almost hear the rapids reading this.
So good- Felt like I was white water rafting!!!
Wow! Perfect descriptions! This is a great subject you chose for the challenge. Loving it!
Oooh great work!! This one reads so well. I especially loved “ravenous reapers”.