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๐“ข๐“พ๐“ท๐“ผ๐“ฑ๐“ฒ๐“ท๐“ฎ ๐“–๐“ธ๐“ต๐“ญ ๐“ฆ๐“ช๐“ผ ๐“—๐“ฎ๐“ป ๐“ข๐“ธ๐“พ๐“ต #8

By Lou HolzPublished 9 months ago โ€ข 1 min read

They gather like storms behind my teeth,

Heavy and heaving, without release.

Each syllable held, sharp and raw,

Scratches the walls of a clenched maw.

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Not every truth is freed into air,

Some burn brighter when left thereโ€”

Buried in the vault of bone and breath,

A language of anger, Mercyโ€™s death.

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But silence builds its own sharp blade,

A mouthful of debts I never paid.

The voice withheld, the song unsung,

Still thunders loud in an empty lung.

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My tongue, a prison; my throat, a grave,

For every โ€œno,โ€ deepens the crave

and grows a vine of verses, tight and fierce,

Threatening the lips they are to pierce

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Until one breathโ€”a screaming chordโ€”

opens the vault, unsheathes the sword.

And all that we had once contained

becomes the flood, the storm, the flame.

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That is the sum of what's unheardโ€”

That is the weight of

repressed words

Mental Healthsad poetrysocial commentaryFree Verse

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Lou Holz

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๐™ฟ๐šŠ๐š›๐š ๐š˜๐š ๐šŠ ๐š‹๐šž๐š—๐š๐š•๐šŽ/๐š™๐š›๐š˜๐š–๐š™๐š๐šŽ๐š ๐š™๐š˜๐šŽ๐š–

๐“ข๐“ฒ๐“ท๐“ฐ๐“ต๐“ฎ ๐“Ÿ๐“ธ๐“ฎ๐“ถ๐“ผ

๐•Š๐•ฅ๐• ๐•ฃ๐•š๐•–๐•ค

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Suit up and read - it's gonna be legen - wait for it - dary.

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran9 months ago

    "My tongue, a prison; my throat, a grave," That was my favourite line. Loved your poem!

  • Caroline Craven9 months ago

    Gosh, you express the frustration and rage of having to hold your tongue so well. I think not feeling able to speak, slowly poisons your soul and everything you stand for. I thought this was amazing.

  • Paul Stewart9 months ago

    This is powerful, Lou. I agree with Tim and Luna's comments. Silence can be a terrible thing, when it's a silence that you shouldn't have to sit in. You expressed that astonishly well and in a relatable way with your words!

  • Luna9 months ago

    Don't cultivate yourself in others' hearts. Don't force others in your own hearts. Others' rulers can't measure your life, and others' maps can't find the path you want to take.

  • Tim Carmichael9 months ago

    Powerful reflection on the weight of silence and the inevitable release of whatโ€™s been held back. Itโ€™s a reminder of how the words we withhold can shape us until they finally find their voice

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