Renewed
Link 3 in Heather Hubler's Haikuplet Chain — For Kenny's Challenge
summer sun scorches
her fair countenance, thoughts melt
into mysteries
*
coalescing cold
are snowflakes on a mountain.
she is returned home.
A/N
Thank you for reading! This is the third link in a haikuplet chain started by Heather Hubler. Cathy Holmes wrote the second link. What a profound piece, Heather. I hope I did it justice.
* If anyone wants to continue it, there are two more links that can be added!
For more information on the challenge by Kenny Penn, check it out below! Deadline is in about 20 days. 😁
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Mackenzie Davis
“When you are describing a shape, or sound, or tint, don’t state the matter plainly, but put it in a hint. And learn to look at all things with a sort of mental squint.” Lewis Carroll
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Comments (13)
Gorgeous poems Mackenzie!
How the hell did I miss this one! Great addition to Heather's Original, Mackenzie!
Ahh, the Mackenzie touch. Beautiful work!!!
I'm quite in love with the cover photo you chose... like I just sat and stared at it for a while. I also enjoyed your two opposing haikus! Great work Mackenzie!!
Love seeing these cool chain creations! Such fun!
Lovely work Mackenzie! 😊👏
You most definitely did it justice! I loved it so much!
Soothing and soulful
This is gorgeous. I can feel the cooling relief.
Beautiful. I love the thoughts melting into mysteries, though that's a frustratingly common sensation for me.
Excellently written
Oh, your last line was just gorgeous and felt so right!!! Loved this. I feel so honored two wonderful creators connected to my piece and then made it even better :)
Beautiful and stirring, Ms Davis! Well done and thank you for highlighting this challenge as I completely missed Kenny's original post!