regurgitation
sensory overload
The mouth drowns in saliva, first bland then sweet bitter boiling acid-
The nose hairs sizzle from the bonfire of yesterday's meals diffusing the air-
The eyes track the bile that's running through every fissure in the concrete-
The ears drumming to the symphony of constricting organs-
The hands strangle the gate, embedding black paint chips into sweaty palms-
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Outstanding piece.
well written poem, great piece
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What a stunningly vivid description of a vile experience. Noticing the extraordinary in the commonplace is a gift of poetry, but you elevate (or spew) this to a new level. If I were a judge, this poem would have a ribbon.